Can someone help?

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  1. Night123 said:

    Cool Can someone help?

    Hey, my band and I are in need of someone who could write the lyrics of a song for us. Could you help us out? If not, do you know anyone who could help? Some of our influences are the All-American Rejects and Boys Like Girls. We would like a song about a guy trying to win the heart of a girl, who either doesn't know who he is, or has known him just as a friend. Anything you could do would help. Feel free to make any changes if you want, it's your call. Contact me at night@rock.com.
     
  2. Rabbitdrive said:

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    I'll have a good go.
     
  3. Rabbitdrive said:

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    Are You Still Drowning in Cocktails and Drugs?

    The fluorescent lights and the disco beat,
    You were dancing; I was twitching my feet,
    I've known you for what seems centuries,
    But I just seem to be forever locked in penitentiaries.
    You wear tank-tops, high heels and mini-skirts,
    I wear corduroy trousers and tattered shirts,
    It seems very ignorant,
    When I've known you since primary school,
    But I've stuck to my own trend,
    And you've followed the fashionable and “cool”.

    Can you see me yet,
    Or are you still drowning in cocktails and drugs?
    Can you remember me yet,
    Or are you aroused by the groups of muscular thugs?
    I've been waiting for you,
    I hope you know that and feel apathetic,
    I'll be here if you need me,
    You'll probably think me pathetic.

    I'd like to think you know who I am,
    But I don't think you give a damn,
    I guess this is a bad way,
    Of trying to explain and say,
    I want to take you to the edge of the world,
    The side no-one else has explored,
    In my mind I hope you'll see me, broken and sore,
    And pick me from hell and take me to the dance floor.

    Can you see me yet,
    Or are you still drowning in cocktails and drugs?
    Can you remember me yet,
    Or are you aroused by the groups of muscular thugs?
    I've been waiting for you,
    I hope you know that and feel apathetic,
    I'll be here if you need me,
    You'll probably think me pathetic.

    Chances,
    Glances,
    Failed Romances,
    Advances,
    Dances,
    Sideways Stances. (x2)

    Can you see me yet,
    Or are you still drowning in cocktails and drugs?
    Can you remember me yet,
    Or are you aroused by the groups of muscular thugs?
    I've been waiting for you,
    I hope you know that and feel apathetic,
    I'll be here if you need me,
    You'll probably think me pathetic.

    Yes, I'm still here,
    Yes, I'm still here,
    And dare I say If I look away even once,
    You'll have left me alone to try and move on?

    I've sent you an e-mail as well, but Just in case you don't get it here you go.
     
  4. Night123 said:

    Smile Thanks

    Thanks for the lyrics! They're great!!!
     
  5. Rabbitdrive said:

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    Tank oo'