Rom->Eng - HELP

Corrections please. Sunt trei cantece. Mersi mult!

Tu esty steaua meaaaa.....
You're my star
Nu mai asteptaaaaaa.......
It can't wait any longer (?)

Ma electrizezi cu privirea ta
You electrify me with your stare/look
Sper sa simty la fel
I hope you feel the same
Vreau sa fii a mea!
I want you to be mine
Vreau sa dorm si-n vis
I want to sleep & then in (a) dream
Sa te pot vedea
Be able to see you
Tu esty steaua meaaaaa......
You're my star

Totul e confuz, stiu ca nu m-auzi
Everything is confused/confusing(?), I know you don't hear me
Esti departe, dar in inima-mi patrunzi
You're far away, but you penetrate my heart
O lume am alergat si te-am cautat....
I ran after the world & I looked for you
Nu mai asteptaaaa....
It can't wait any longer(?)
Tu esty steaua meaaa......
You're my star

REFREN:Un ocean in desert
An empty ocean/an ocean in the desert
Dak imi dai nu iert...
If you give me (it), I can't forgive (?)
Lacrimat ma topesc,
The weeping/the tears melt me
Iar ma am in suflet...
But/while I have in my soul

Un ocean in desert





"Intr-o zi"

Alerg pe strazi pustii si nu pot sa ma opresc
I run by empty streets & I can't stop
Vantul imi bate in fata, luminile ma orbesc
The wind blows in my face, the lights blind me
Aud o voce, ma chema inapoi
I hear a voice, it calls me back
Nu vreau sa ma intorc, vreau sa uit de amandoi.
I don't want to turn around, I want to forget both of us

Refren:

Intr-o zi ne vom vedea
One day we'll see each other
I knwo it should be something like "In a day" or whatever, but I'm trying to translate it to the English phrasing
Si in privirea mea vei fi ca un strain
& in my stare you'll be like a stranger
Vei stii ca nu mai sunt a ta.
You'll know that I'm no longer yours
Intr-o zi tu vei afla ca sunt cu-altcineva
One day you'll find out that I'm with someone else
Atunci va fi tarziu
Then it'll be late
Langa tine totul e pustiu.
Near you everything will be empty

Strofa 2:
In fiecare noapte pasii m-aduc spre tine
In every night that passed I would bring myself to you
Dar stiu ca locul meu demult nu mai e langa tine
But I know that my former(?) place is no longer by your side
Simt cum imi pierd controlul si sufletul meu e trist
I feel how I lose control & my soul is sad
Ma uit in jurul meu, simt ca nu mai rezist.
I look around, I feel that I can no longer resist

Interesting lyrics. They make no sense!!

But here you are with the corrections:
Nu mai asteptaaaaaa.......
Don't wait anylonger

Vreau sa dorm si-n vis
I want to sleep and in (a) dream

Totul e confuz, stiu ca nu m-auzi
Everything is confusing, I know you don't hear me

O lume am alergat si te-am cautat....
I ran around the world and I looked for you

Un ocean in desert
An ocean in the desert
Daca imi dai nu iert...
If you give me (it), I can't forgive (What exactly can't he forgive?!?! Makes no sense!)
Lacrimat ma topesc,
Tearful I melt
Iar ma am in suflet...
Again I have myself in my soul (This is really profound and makes no sense!! LOL! )

Yeah, I'm glad it's not just me, the lyrics are VERY abstract.

I actually posted another set of lyrics I guess while you were doing the first set. Would you mind taking a look at those as well as another set I'm about to translate?

I'd really appreciate it. But I know that you just woke up, so if you don't have time, I completely understand!

::EDIT

Sorry if you are doing the corrections, cause I've been going back & fixing little things that I messed up on...so, sorry for making you work harder than you should have to.

Here you are Very good translation. Only a few corrections

Oh and I'll correct what you're about to translate a bit later cause now I have to go.

Alerg pe strazi pustii si nu pot sa ma opresc
I run on empty streets & I can't stop

Refren:

Si in privirea mea vei fi ca un strain
& in my eyes you'll be like a stranger (it sounds better in english)

Langa tine totul e pustiu.
Near you everything is empty

Strofa 2:
In fiecare noapte pasii m-aduc spre tine
In every night (my) steps bring me towards you

Dar stiu ca locul meu demult nu mai e langa tine
But I know that my place is no longer by your side

Simt cum imi pierd controlul si sufletul meu e trist
I feel how I lose control & my soul is sad

The chorus of the first song makes no sense at all because the lyrics DeBaires found (I saw them too on the internet) are incorrect. Seeing the lyrics and knowing the song,I’ve looked up the right lyrics .In fact the chorus goes like this, and has a lot more sense :
Un ocean in desert
Daca-mi dai nu iert
Lacrimi ard, ma topesc
Iarna am in suflet

(I don’t want to interfere with dya’s work ,so she’ll translate them for you. )

Originally Posted by sandhy

The chorus of the first song makes no sense at all because the lyrics DeBaires found (I saw them too on the internet) are incorrect. Seeing the lyrics and knowing the song,I’ve looked up the right lyrics .In fact the chorus goes like this, and has a lot more sense :
Un ocean in desert
Daca-mi dai nu iert
Lacrimi ard, ma topesc
Iarna am in suflet

(I don’t want to interfere with dya’s work ,so she’ll translate them for you. )

I thought she was pronouncing some of the words weird, ha ha. Thanks for finding this for me!!!

Would you mind checking my translation for the chorus?

Un ocean in desert
An ocean in the desert
Daca-mi dai nu iert
If you give me (it), I don't forgive
Lacrimi ard, ma topesc
Tears burn, I melt
Iarna am in suflet
Winter in my soul

Very well. Just one thing:

Iarna am in suflet
Winter (I have) in my soul ( <=>I have winter in my soul)

{Shandy, multumesc mult pentru versurile corecte. Cele initiale nu aveau niciun sens!! Aa, si sa stii ca nu ma suparam deloc daca ai fi tradus tu ultima strofa Ar fi chiar culmea sa ma supar cand altii isi ofera ajutorul!}

Oh whoops lol, Thanks

You're welcome

Any chance you could take a look at my other post?

Originally Posted by dya

Very well. Just one thing:

Iarna am in suflet
Winter (I have) in my soul ( <=>I have winter in my soul)

{Shandy, multumesc mult pentru versurile corecte. Cele initiale nu aveau niciun sens!! Aa, si sa stii ca nu ma suparam deloc daca ai fi tradus tu ultima strofa Ar fi chiar culmea sa ma supar cand altii isi ofera ajutorul!}

You're welcome!
[Dya,ma gandeam ca daca ai inceput "o treaba" sa o duci tot tu la capat ]