what you think? be honest and give advice if any is had

My love will never let you go


(verse1)
I see it when i look in your eyes
that you dont share the feelings i do
i hope that you will still realize
girl i will be here for you

(chorus x2)
Baby i will wait for you
to understand my love is true
I've never had someone mean so much to me
and i never wanna let you go

(verse2)
i'll never interfer with your life
cause its with you i wanna be
you make me happy to be alive
when in your arms i feel so free

(chorus x2)
Baby i will wait for you
to understand my love is true
I've never had someone mean so much to me
and i never wanna let you go

(freestyle)
Yo, cause in your arms is where i wanna be
i never want you to turn your back on me
gimmie a chance to show my love to you
no one can love you the way i do
never wanna see another man in your arms
cause if i do, quick sound the alarm
i wanna spend everday with you
thats why baby I will wait for you

(chorus x2)
Baby i will wait for you
to understand my love is true
I've never had someone mean so much to me
and i never wanna let you go

(sub-verse)
no i will never let you go
i was put on this earth to love you so
don't let our love die..no
let it grow up to the sky
with every bit of my heart and soul
i swear to you i will give my all
but for now i'm gunna wait for you!!

(chorus)
Baby i will wait for you
to understand my love is true
I've never had someone mean so much to me
and i never wanna let you go
no girl i will never...let you...go
mmmm my love with never let you go

I like it all but the "freestyle" It may just be me, but maybe if you used the more cinematographic method of talking over the music instead.

ight. thanks yo

Its a good song, somewhat cliche though.

There are millions of love songs in the world, what you need to do is make sure you're being original. I don't feel like you've really tested yourself with these lyrics, you should always look for the most intricate rhyme you can. For example, rhyming "be" with "me" is fairly simple, whereas if you look at the syllabul (appologies for spelling) you want to rhyme and try to link it to another word like "identity" or "gradually" it opens up a whole new world for the song.

Its a good song, it just needs work to make it a great song.

PS - if you feel like commenting my songs, please do.