First song attempt

Verse 1 - Scream
In a country far from here, fighting over oil
Whose pockets do we line, who do we spoil
Its our own mistakes, why can’t we face it
We cover our eyes, are blinded by lies

Break 1 - spoken
For freedom of country and people

Chorus - sung
Conflagration, domination, contributes to my intoxication
I can’t hide it, We can’t fight it
But I will survive this

Verse 2 - scream
We’ll set off nuclear bombs, to rid the world of the hated
Isn’t this wrong but noone will say it
The killer of a killer, does that make him better
who has the right to say who lives and who dies

Break 2 - spoken
We did what we had to do

Chorus - sung
Conflagration, domination, contributes to my intoxication
I can’t hide it, We can’t fight it
But I will survive this
(we will survive this)

- SOLO-

Chorus - sung
Conflagration, domination, contributes to my intoxication
I can’t hide it, We can’t fight it
But I will survive this
(we will survive this)

Break 3 - spoken - acoustic guitar/clean riffs
We are sorry ma’m
you son has been killed in war
he was a great man

This song is great! I love the message it sends to the audience. It would be interesting to hear the tune to this song.

I hope that time will be over soon and songs like that become obsolete. I once wrote this:

bush fires

a people on the decline
a far misleaded crowd
a war that cannot be won
ideals, not beyond doubt
they're dealing with opinions
the truth is not allowed

the tide may be turning
while bush fires are burning
strong emotions churning
while bush fires are burning

there was talk of a crusade
its essence, though, is oil
on civilizations birthplace
they're wasting men and soil
not sure of what they're gaining
it's obvious what they spoil

the tide may be turning
while bush fires are burning
strong emotions churning
while bush fires are burning

when will they be learning
that bush fires are burning

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Ah, and yes, I like your text.

Bernd

texter-bernd - You'll have to make your own thread mate, sorry.


Jacobdatz - Your song reminds me of something Teatament or Exodus would do... Very fast, very heavy... Spikey drums and guitars... ThrashThrashTHRASH!!