Calling All Song Writers

The guitarist in my band just got dumped by his girlfriend. He would like it if someone could write a song about how she is making a big mistake, and that he'll be waiting for her to come back to him. He won't be the one crawling back to her. He still loves her though. He really should just get over her, but that's just what I think. Any help would be great! You can post them here, or send them to me at night@rock.com

The girlfriends name is Bridget by the way. In case you wanted to know.

ok, I'll give it a try, if you could give some additional info it would be great, if it's to personal it's ok
cheers!

What else would you like to know?

idk some things they0ve been through and stuff like that

She plays on the soccer team at school, and he plays soccer and football. They met through soccer practices and at school. They dated for about 3ish months, but have know each other for alot longer. His best friend just so happens to be her brother, that kind of throws in a twist, or not?!? They walked through the halls at school together all of the time, they were inseperable. Everyone knew they were meant to be together before they did. At lunch she wouldn't order anything, she'd just eat off of his tray. If you want to know anything else just ask.

ok, that's gr8...
well I gues I have some work to do, I'm having little trouble at school so I'll have to study more... that takes my time for songwritting, so don't expect me to have it in a few days, but in no more than 4 or 5 days you'll have it, if you need it earlier just don't count with me on this one

No rush. Take your time. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I want this song to be the best it can be!

ok I'll do my best

You do that!

well the song is allmost done, but I need to know so I can finish ths, why did they split up??

She left him for another guy

Well I have two that I had already written, so they're not based on their personal experiences, but I figured I might as well post them and let you see them.

Lost In the Transition

I walk away from the life I left behind me
All that pain and fear I based my life on
I don’t know where or who I would be
If I didn’t build up the courage
To bring you into my life

Because when you’re here, I can find my way out
Trying to figure out, what this life is about
You care and understand me
And I hope to see you soon
I’m still lost in the transition
Of being here without you

Just the touch of your hand, makes me the worst day worth living
Same as the words we have said, I want this to last forever
Want you to know, you can tell me how you’re feeling
Most memorable time of my life
When I saw that sparkle in your eye

I need you next to me

Because when you’re here, I can find my way out
Trying to figure out, what this life is about
You care and understand me
And I hope to see you soon
I’m still lost in the transition
Of being here without you

I wonder when we’re not together
Do you think of me too
The rest of my days are being blocked out
Cause all I can see is the image of you

And me

Can’t spend the rest of my days, dreaming you were here
But there’s a comfort, knowing that I was once happy
Remembering you makes me cry, and watching every tear
I will always care for you
And I can’t let that die

Because when we are together, we can find our way out
Trying to figure out, what this life is about
I care and understand you
And I hope to see you soon
I’m still lost in the transition
Because I’m still here
Without you

Broken Thoughts

The times I leave for myself
They don't turn into comfort
These attempts to clear my mind
Fail and they no longer work

Staring through this window
The reflections in my eyes
Harder and harder to concentrate
All of my ideas, they end and die

I’m having broken thoughts again
Keeps bringing up the truth
I keep lying to myself
I’m not really over you
Trying to erase you from my dreams
But it can’t happen till I know
What am I holding on to
And why I can’t let it go

Now it is so hard to speak
Not a single sound will come
Nothing but you in mind
Can’t figure out what I’ve done

Why have you consumed me
Why won’t I fight against it
You were just too perfect to stay here
Still I never gave you that credit

Please just let the world go
And think of me once more

Please just let the world go
And think of me once more

I’m having broken thoughts again
Keeps bringing up the truth
I keep lying to myself
I’m not really over you
Trying to erase you from my dreams
But it can’t happen till I know
What am I holding on to
And why I can’t let it go

Maybe I was wrong
Maybe you were right
The things that I expected
Were too far out of sight

Maybe you were wrong
Maybe I was right
Having everything we’ve ever wanted
If we just tried it one more time

I’m having broken thoughts again
Keeps bringing up the truth
I keep lying to myself
I’m not really over you
Trying to erase you from my dreams
But it can’t happen till I know
What am I holding on to
And why I can’t let it go

I’m having broken thoughts again
Broken thoughts
I’m having broken thoughts again
Broken thoughts
Keeps bringing up the truth
I keep lying to myself
I’m not really over you

Cool. Thanks for the songs!