New to Lyric Writing...."All Again"

All Again

Would you believe me
If I said it hurt me too
All of those negative things, not one of them were true
You showed me what it was, to feel so close
Everything filled my life, but you were the one that meant the most

The pieces of who I was
Are scattered everywhere
Yet no one dares to help me, the pain is too much to bare
Through all the distractions, you’re all I’m aiming for
I will give my everything to you, to hear you say I’m yours

I screamed your name
But you acted like you couldn’t hear
Completely changed myself, still you were nowhere near
The weight of the memory, has been holding me down
Why did you refuse to turn around
Realize things have changed
And do this all again

I’m sore from all the yelling
I ache from all the hate
If we remain silently waiting, it will all be taken by fate
For all we know, we were never supposed to meet
But we did, then you left
And I can’t stand on my own feet

The pieces of who I was
Are scattered everywhere
Yet no one dares to help me, the pain is too much to bare
Through all the distractions, you’re all I’m aiming for
I will give my everything to you, to hear you say I’m yours

I thought I lost everything
Until nothing else mattered
A single moment with you
Makes all my losses better
I know I wasn’t perfect
You had no faith that I’d learn
So you turned away from me
Never to return

(Whisper)
And I tried
To scream your name
But apparently you couldn’t hear
Changed every bad detail about me
But still you came nowhere near

The weight of all the memories
They are keeping me down
Why couldn’t you just turn around
Things change
Things change
Let’s try it all again

i think this is really good. especially since youre new to writing.
and i really like the chorus.