Day by the Sea

Hey, tell me what you guys think.

Sitting on the edge of stony rock steps
My heart pumps blood through my veins
So much tension, baby, so much to say
We need to break free of these chains

I knew that it would never work out, dear
I knew you could never commit
But on that cold night, in the cool mountain air
My logic was forced to submit

In that one kiss, so passionate and sweet
I felt your love and desire
No one, before could make you feel so complete
No one had taken you higher

But it just ain’t that simple babe, fast-forward two months
We’re lying on an old, empty beach
You’ve got your arms across my chest
But into your heart, no more can I reach

Yea, the summer time brought crazy emotions
And the connection we had was so strong
But despite all these feelings, our love and affection
Couldn’t stretch this distance, so long

So I hope you’ll keep me in the back of your mind, dear
I hope you will never forget
Cause through all of my bad times, and all of my sad times
You’re the one love I’ll never regret

And if you see me, honey, passing you by
Or if you find yourself walking by me
Turn around and jump into my arms, girl
Cause I can’t forget our day by the sea.

its good. theres no chorus though. so it just seems more like a poem than a song. but i like it.