Heartbroken- Please read and review

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  1. Jean1singer said:

    Post Heartbroken- Please read and review

    Ok, so this is a song that is acctually true. I acctually thought that people were just trying make lyrics when they said you get "butterflies" in your stomach or your heart drops or your heart hurts or your stomach twists or whatever, but when It happend to me I acctually felt it, it was soooo wierd. So here's the song. Please Read and Review.

    Heartbroken
    By: Emm
    Album: ??

    when I heard all of, the syptoms of love, thought it just a lie--
    when I listened to, all of those songs, thought maybe they were going crazy--

    ♥but my stomache twists
    and my heart drops
    I can acctually feel it
    and it won't stop
    Even though it hurts
    you want it to come back
    cause it's the only thing
    that fills your emptiness
    I tried to escape
    didn't wanna show my face
    it acctually hurts to be heartbroken
    you acctually fall out of place♥

    and so now I know,
    and i'm telling you,
    you don't want it to happen,
    but yet you do

    and so now i've been shown,
    and i'm letting you know,
    that it's the truth,
    avoid it at all costs
    (if you can)
    avoid it if you can
    oh oh

    ♥but my stomache twists
    and my heart drops
    I can acctually feel it
    and it won't stop
    Even though it hurts
    you want it to come back
    cause it's the only thing
    that fills your emptiness
    I tried to escape
    didn't wanna show my face
    it acctually hurts to be heartbroken
    you acctually fall out of place♥

    what a feeling
    emotionally and physically
    what does it mean
    if I can't get him to listen to me

    cause I don't want it
    thought I did
    but that was when
    I didn't know it existed
    I was just tryin to prove it

    ♥but my stomache twists
    and my heart drops
    I can acctually feel it
    and it won't stop
    Even though it hurts
    you want it to come back
    cause it's the only thing
    that fills your emptiness
    I tried to escape
    didn't wanna show my face
    it acctually hurts to be heartbroken
    you acctually fall out of place♥
     
  2. thischick said:

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    "it acctually hurts to be heartbroken
    you acctually fall out of place"

    "cause I don't want it
    thought I did"

    - i really like those parts.

    i think its pretty good.
    original too.