i wrote this about a stupid guy

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  1. thischick said:

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    that was jsut a cop-out
    dont even know what this is about
    im sick of this b***s***
    dont make me shout
    you took my trust and turned it all into doubt
    baby that was just a cop-out

    you sit here and tell me you love me
    but only when you sit here alone, lonely
    dont think for one second im gonna give in
    your playin a game and i promise to win
    im finally done with all of this crap
    move b**** or youre gonna get slapped

    cause that was just a cop-out
    dont even know what this is about
    im sick of this b***s***
    dont make me shout
    you took my trust and turned it all into doubt
    whatever, that was just a cop-out

    now youre sayingyou dont know
    what you want
    one minute im yours,
    the next im not
    make up your mind,
    youre running out of time.
    cause babe im hard to replace,
    but men like you are easy to find.

    that was just a cop-out
    dont even know what this is about
    im sick of this b***s***
    dont make me shout
    you took my trust and turned it all into doubt
    whatever, that was just a cop-out

    take your time to think about it,
    i promise im not gonna worry about it.
    as time goes on, im startin to get sick,
    of how you are and all your dumb a** tricks.
    your a piece of s***, and i think im done.
    you treated this like a game...
    and just like i promised...
    i won.

    (i actually dont like the chorus. haha i dont even think it makes sense. but its just what was in my head for some reason. be harsh, i really wanna know what people think. i write every once in awhile. i actually wrote it in math class.)
     
  2. Jean1singer said:

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    I think it's good. It acctually reminds me of a certain "someone" anyways I liked the part where you said

    "now youre saying you dont know
    what you want
    one minute im yours,
    the next im not
    make up your mind,
    youre running out of time.
    cause babe im hard to replace,
    but men like you are easy to find."

    and the chorus
     
  3. thischick said:

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    thanks. i think it definately needs some work. but im workin on it.
     
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    Ultimate_Worrier said:

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    Sounds less of a song and more of you venting your spleen at someone who pi**ed you off.
     
  5. thischick said:

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    haha i agree "Ultimate Worrier"
    haha and i was venting. so yeah, youre right.