Like Tomorrow (Please comment)

Knowing, everything
Seems to be over rated
And i, can’t fly
Yet again i think no one can

Listen to me now
Open up your ears
There’s something in my mind
The one thing i fear

Chorus:
And i know
I have more dreams
Than memories
And I’ll admit
This glass is half empty
My God I'm thirsty
And i feel
Like I’m supposed to
But there’s a catch
You’re still here today
Like tomorrow



Seeing, mistreating
You’re killing me inside
And i, get by
But i think that’s ending soon

Shaking in my boots
Because i do not see
Situations in my mind
Of were i want to be


(Chorus)

Then there is a funky little powerchord thing that 'goes down', before the chorus again.


I have no idea what this is about. Keyboard and a text box and bam.

Please comment, and check out the Dumb Girl 1 and 2. And review them. Lay into me as much as possible. Its the only way i'll learn.

Those aren't bad... Not bad at all.

I like this part best:

And i know
I have more dreams
Than memories

A great way of telling "I'm young ..", such a pity I didn't come up with this one!

Keep going!

Bernd

i like it too

Cheers.