summer night

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  1. texter-bernd said:

    Default summer night

    the sun is out, it's warm and bright
    forget the cold, enjoy the light
    summer fete - stay out at night
    have some fun, it's all right
    dance and music by torchlight
    find a girl - hold her tight

    warm summer night
    everything feels all right
    on a warm summer night

    fun and parties everywhere
    come out of your private lair
    enjoy the night's warm summer air
    your joy is doubled if it's shared
    lay by the girl for who you care
    touch her skin, sniff her hair

    warm summer night ...

    lying in your arm
    nothing can do me harm
    on a warm summer night

    holidays by the sea
    charge you with new energy
    no time for trouble, here you're free
    be who you've always wished to be
    lie in the shadow of a tree
    which guards your dreams and makes you see

    warm summer night ...

    I've surrendered to your charms
    and leave my worries in your arms
    your presence makes - me believe
    life can be a warm summer night

    lying nude in the spray
    on the beach of the cay
    live your live your own way
    never mind what others say
    what feels good is okay
    seize the night, seize the day

    warm summer night ...

    declare a young and pretty teen
    for tonight your fairy queen
    show her things she's never seen,
    places where she's never been
    these young cuties are so keen
    to gain experience, being so green

    warm summer night ...
     
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    Ultimate_Worrier said:

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    Each line of each verse rhymes with the first, that's going to get samey and irritating after a while...

    Try to have alternate lines rhyming.
     
  3. texter-bernd said:

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    Thanks for your feedback. Well, the A-A-A-A-A-A pattern was actually intended. Did you listen to the song? It is meant to be very relaxed:
    http://www.myspace.com/texter_bernd
    "Summer night" is number 8 of the playlist