I Hear The Toll

Here's my newest outing. Hope you guys like it.

What a disaster.
This was not supposed to be
The mess that was made.
Bodies line the fields I see.
Where's the master?
Behind the bushes he is found
Crying to God's mercy bathing
In the blood with which he's bound.

The lifeless fallacy grows
To fill the endless void
Till all that's sacred is
Everything that they exploit.

Chorus:
When I can see that
No one else is here,
That ever haunting sound,
It somehow finds my ear,
And I now know
I choose to live in
The presence of my death.
I know it's me,
The bell tolls my last breath.

What the hell happened?
He turns to me with a heavy heart.
Six days of staying alive
Before everything fell apart.
No battle can end when
No one's left for the victory.
The underdog is disrespected
When he's the joke of history.

Ashamed and with
No waver in his hand,
An unseen swiftness
Relieves the lonely stand.

Chorus

The emptiness of "No Man's Land"
Penetrates my very being,
Restricting the endless view
Of the Hell I'm seeing.

What would be more honorable....
Try try to go it alone
Or stay here in this place
And never again go home?

Chorus

Not... Bad at all

Hmmm I like it. I like your choice of words very much. Keep up the good work

I like these lyrics and the message behind them
great job
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