one shot: please read and comment

ONE SHOT

you mouth a hair thin trigger ready to go off

your hate a loaded chamber ready to end it all

line up your dominos of anger and with a bulit whach them fall

/one shot stop this when you fier don't miss forget me pull the trigger first hit me where it hurts give me a lead kiss one shot so make a fist and stop this/

lock and load let it go

**** the hammer lose controll

ignite the gun powder end all you know

nothing will be the same

after you end the pain

/one shot stop this when you fier don't miss forget me pull the trigger first hit me where it hurts give me a lead kiss one shot so make a fist and stop this/

steedy now your kinda shaky

don't for get to remove the safty

now show me what you've been thinking lately

wow martin this is appsolutly amazing!
I like this.
i still like mirrors the most tho!
keep up the good work!!

Juliana

lol that was my gfs sister posting a comment on my account sorry haha thanks juliana

your hate a loaded chamber ready to end it all

to me this line is just ridicules, please explain

ok so your hate a loaded chamber ready to end it all is the chamber of a gun you know once you got on in the chamber you r ready to fier so its like saying that the persons ready to blow just more cratively

hmm ok.. are you sure that that's what you call it? thanks for explain

yes a 100% sure lol

this is good...could b better still

how so?

cool~~



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Originally Posted by 4 shades of reason

wow martin this is appsolutly amazing!
I like this.
i still like mirrors the most tho!
keep up the good work!!

Juliana

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Originally Posted by Klukoklai

your hate a loaded chamber ready to end it all

to me this line is just ridicules, please explain

haha don't worry I got it, I like it.