Sever It At The Neck

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  1. 4 shades of reason said:

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    not much to say about this one i sat down and this is one it came out lol
    i am not sure what inspierd me or even what its completly about but the feeling i had when i made it were betrayal coldness numb like nobody really cared anymore and i was startin to just accept it and move on rather then find out why or try to make them so any ways hope you like it

    SEVER IT AT THE NECK

    I'v been laying here with my soul decever for longer then you'd exspect

    please take your dull emotion cleaver and aim for just below my neck

    swing untill the burdons gone make sure you gotta check

    make sure theres nothing left

    take this controlling entity and sever it at the neck

    /i'm still here so take well the gettings good

    should have walked away well i could

    to save myself you take and take just like i knew you would/

    take your accusing spears and put them through my chest

    don't worry about the scars i'll store them with the rest

    you can write it off and send me the blame

    doesnt matter idon't feel the same

    take till all i have is my name

    then stake my heart to the wall and put it in a frame
     
  2. Klukoklai said:

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    good work.. semi-good metaphors.. thumbs up!
    Look! My mouth is a fountain!
     
  3. 4 shades of reason said:

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    thanks alot a love gettin coments thanks