Soner arica - Kusursuz Ask

Arkadaslar ben tercüme etmeyi denedim....fakat cümlelerde baglaclardan kaynaklanan anlam kaymasi oluyor biraz.Bu isten gercekten iyi anliyan bir arkadas bunu tercüme edebilirse cok mutlu olacagim...tesekkürler


Artik gitme demeyecegim, zaten iyice hazirsin bu sefer.
Herseyi yaninda götür; anilarimizi, umutlarimizi, sevgimi de al belki lâzim olur.
Tek kelime etmesem diyorum, ama etmeliyim, sana bilmedigin bir seyden
bahsetmeliyim; kendimden. Evet, onca zaman tanidigini sandigin benden.
Hirçin yanimi gördün daha çok, oysa öyle uysal bir çocukmusum ki.
Neydi beni zaman zaman hoyrat yapan?
Sanirim, düsünmedin.
Birini ayri tutsam da renklerin hepsini sevdim, mevsimleri de.
Aslinda çok sey var sevdigim,
kavgalar ve savaslar disinda bir de niye olursa olsun vedalasma anlari,
Isterdim ki uyumlu halimi yasasaydin daima ama bana hep vurgun
saatlerinde geldin, ya da sen vurdun.
Uzaklara bakardim uysal çocuklugumda içimde dolmayan derin boslugumla,
denizden gelecek bir gemi bekledim durdum,
sonra yildizlara baktim yillarca ve sen sandigim bir yildiza.
Kadinlar, erkekler, çocuklar ve sehirler tanidim, çogunu da sevdim.
Asklarim da oldu, hem de ugruna ölebilecegim asklar, ama en çok seni sevdim.
Ve simdi gidiyorsun, evet git içimdeki melek sana dua edecek.
Sanirim kahrolmayacagým bu veda sahnesine - senin baban öldü mü?
Bu gidiþ ölümden beter olamaz.
Hangisi doðru bilmiyorum,
Seni ugurlayip öylece kalmak mi?
Yoksa, benim uyumami bekleyip gitmen, benim de sensiz sabaha uyanmam mi?
Bence simdi git, hayýr gitme! Yani git de önce üstümü ört, ben uzanayim þöyle, Isigi kapat ve git.
Hayir hayir gitme!
Yani git de isigi yak git, ben karanliktan korkuyorum da!
Hem sensizlik hem karanlik bu kadari fazla.
Üstümü de örtme bu sevkat de fazla, isiklarin hepsi açik olsun.
Içim burkuluyor sen nasil gidersen git.
Dur, burayi iyi dinle; birkez daha söylüyorum ve son kez.
Seni seviyorum.
Sen giderken ben içimden haykiracagim 'kusursuz bir askti bu' diye.
Kusursuz bir aþktý benim sana büyüttüðüm sen ne yaþadýn bilmiyorum...

Yine de tanidi gönlüm yasadi
Bir kusursuz ask büyüttüm sana pisman degilim

Her aksam vaktinde bu gönül üzülür
Hüzünle dolar seni düsünür
Simdi çok uzakta kimbilir neredesin
Geri dön ya da dönme ben sendeyim

Artik gitme demeyecegim, zaten iyice hazirsin bu sefer. / i will not say "dont go" anymore, you are already perfectly ready to go this time
Herseyi yaninda götür; anilarimizi, umutlarimizi, sevgimi de al belki lâzim olur. / take everything with you : our memories, our hopes, take my love also maybe you will need it
Tek kelime etmesem diyorum, ama etmeliyim, sana bilmedigin bir seyden / i say myself i don't want to tell any word, but i should, i should tell you about something
bahsetmeliyim; kendimden. Evet, onca zaman tanidigini sandigin benden. / which you dont know : myself.Yes, me who you thought that you have known for long time
Hirçin yanimi gördün daha çok, oysa öyle uysal bir çocukmusum ki. / you saw usually my aggressive part, but i was such silent kid
Neydi beni zaman zaman hoyrat yapan? / what was the thing making me rough sometimes..
Sanirim, düsünmedin. / i guess you didnt think about it
Birini ayri tutsam da renklerin hepsini sevdim, mevsimleri de. / even if i love one of the color mostly, i like all of them, also seasons..
Aslinda çok sey var sevdigim, / actually i have too many things what i like
kavgalar ve savaslar disinda bir de niye olursa olsun vedalasma anlari, / except fights and wars, and also even what's reason : farewell times.
Isterdim ki uyumlu halimi yasasaydin daima ama bana hep vurgun / i wish you would live my coordinated times but you always came
saatlerinde geldin, ya da sen vurdun. / while i was aggressive, or you made me..

bazı kısımlarda bağlaclar kesin kopuyor anlam kayması olmasada cunku ingilizce deki cümle yapısıyla türkçedeki bir değil bunu kabul ediosan devam ediyim ceviriye

Originally Posted by hailstorm

bazı kısımlarda bağlaclar kesin kopuyor anlam kayması olmasada cunku ingilizce deki cümle yapısıyla türkçedeki bir değil bunu kabul ediosan devam ediyim ceviriye

sevinirim arkadasim devam edersen....bu isin ustasi sizlersiniz sonucta tskler emeklerin icin

i wont say dont go anymore, indeed you are already prepared this time,
take everything with you; our memories, our hopes,
take my love too, maybe it will be needed
i say i shouldnt tell a word, but i have to, about the thing
you dont know
i have to tell; from myself. Yes, me, for all this time you supposed
that you know
mostly you saw me wild, but a so kind child
i am.
what was that makes me wild time to time?
i guess, u didnt think
even i keep separate something, i loved all colours, all seasons too
actually there are lots of i love,
everything instead of wars and fights and also
farewell moments,
i wish you would live my reasonable manner always but you came always
on my hit times, or you hit me
i used to look to fars on my childhood with the emptiness inside of me which never fills
used to wait a ship will come from sea
then used to looked at stars years and the star i supposed that it is you
women, men, children and cities i met, mostly loved them
loves i had too, the loves that i can die for, but YOU i most loved.
and now you are going, alright go, the angel inside of me will always pray for you
i guess i wont be heartsick to this farewell scene - did your father die?
this going cant be worse than death
i dont know what is right
wish you good and stay like that?
or, to make you wait my sleeping, and mine waking to silent morning?
i guess, go now, no dont! i mean go, but cover me at first
let me lay there, and then turn off the light, and go.
no no dont go!
i mean go but turn on the light, just because i am scaring from dark
both being without you and darkness, this is too much
dont cover me too, this tenderness is too much, let all the lights on
inside of me is dying, go however you want
Stay, listen this carefully, i am saying one more time and last time
I LOVE YOU
while you are going i will yell inside of me as "this was perfect love"
perfect love it was, that i grew for you, i dont know what you lived...

even those my heart knew and lived
i grew a perfect love for you, i am not regretting
every evening this heart gets sad
fullfills with sadness and thinks of you
now you are too far, who knows where you are
Come back or dont, i am yours


P.S it isnt my translation..

Originally Posted by mehmet05_5

i wont say dont go anymore, indeed you are already prepared this time,
take everything with you; our memories, our hopes,
take my love too, maybe it will be needed
i say i shouldnt tell a word, but i have to, about the thing
you dont know
i have to tell; from myself. Yes, me, for all this time you supposed
that you know
mostly you saw me wild, but a so kind child
i am.
what was that makes me wild time to time?
i guess, u didnt think
even i keep separate something, i loved all colours, all seasons too
actually there are lots of i love,
everything instead of wars and fights and also
farewell moments,
i wish you would live my reasonable manner always but you came always
on my hit times, or you hit me
i used to look to fars on my childhood with the emptiness inside of me which never fills
used to wait a ship will come from sea
then used to looked at stars years and the star i supposed that it is you
women, men, children and cities i met, mostly loved them
loves i had too, the loves that i can die for, but YOU i most loved.
and now you are going, alright go, the angel inside of me will always pray for you
i guess i wont be heartsick to this farewell scene - did your father die?
this going cant be worse than death
i dont know what is right
wish you good and stay like that?
or, to make you wait my sleeping, and mine waking to silent morning?
i guess, go now, no dont! i mean go, but cover me at first
let me lay there, and then turn off the light, and go.
no no dont go!
i mean go but turn on the light, just because i am scaring from dark
both being without you and darkness, this is too much
dont cover me too, this tenderness is too much, let all the lights on
inside of me is dying, go however you want
Stay, listen this carefully, i am saying one more time and last time
I LOVE YOU
while you are going i will yell inside of me as "this was perfect love"
perfect love it was, that i grew for you, i dont know what you lived...

even those my heart knew and lived
i grew a perfect love for you, i am not regretting
every evening this heart gets sad
fullfills with sadness and thinks of you
now you are too far, who knows where you are
Come back or dont, i am yours


P.S it isnt my translation..

tesekkürler arkadasim yardimin icin...

rica ederim ..