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The Atheist Christmas Carol

It's the season of grace coming out of the void,
Doba je godine za ljupkost koja dolazi iz praznine
where man is saved by a voice in the distance.
Kada čovek je spasan od glasa u daljini
It's the season of possible miracle cures,
Doba je godine za moguća čudesna lečenja
where hope is currency and death is not the last unknown.
Kada nada je valuta i smrt nije zadnja nepoznatnost.

Time begins to fade, age is welcome home.
Vreme počne da nestaje, starost je dobrodošla svojoj kući.
It's the season of eyes meeting over the noise
Doba je godine za oči koji se sretnu nad zvukom
and holding fast with short realisations.
črstvo držeći kratka shvatanja.
It's the season of cold making warmth a divine intervention.
Doba je godine za hladnoću praveći toplotu božansko posredovanje
You are safe here, you know, now.
Na bezbednom si ovde, znaš, sada.

Don't forget. Don't forget:
Ne zaboravi. Ne zaboravi:
I love, I love, I love you.
Volim, volim, volim te.
Don't forget. Don't forget:
Ne zaboravi. Ne zaboravi:
I love, I love, I love you.
Volim, volim, volim te.

It's the season of scars and of wounds in the heart
Doba je godine za ožbiljka i rane u srcu.
Of feeling the full weight of our burdens.
Da osećamo pun težine svojih tereta.
It's the season of bowing our heads in the wind
Doba je godine da sagibamo glavama u vetru
And knowing that we are not alone in fear, not alone in the dark.
I da znamo da nismo sami u strahu, nismo sami u tamni.

Don't forget. Don't forget:
De zaboravi. Ne zaboravi:
I love, I love, I love you.
Volim, volim, volim te.
Don't forget. Don't forget:
Ne zaboravi. Ne zaboravi:
I love, I love, I love you.
Volim, volim, volim te.
Don't forget. Don't forget:
Ne zaboravi. Ne zaboravi:
I love, I love, I love you.
Volim, volim, volim te.
Don't forget. Don't forget:
Ne zaboravi. Ne zaboravi:
I love, I love, I love you.
Volim, volim, volim te.

Your translation is just fine!

where man is saved by a voice in the distance.
gde čovek je spašen glasom iz daljine
...
It's the season of eyes meeting over the noise
Doba je godine kad oči se susreću uprkos buci (not sure about this but..)
..
It's the season of cold making warmth a divine intervention.
Doba je godine kada hladnoća čini toplotu božanskom intervencijom
...
It's the season of scars and of wounds in the heart
Sezona je ožiljaka i rana na srcu
Of feeling the full weight of our burdens.
kada osećamo svu težinu svojih tereta (problema)
It's the season of bowing our heads in the wind
Doba je godine kada spuštamo glave na vetru
And knowing that we are not alone in fear, not alone in the dark.
I kada znamo da nismo sami u strahu, nismo sami u tami.


And.. about this..
and holding fast with short realisations

To ‘hold fast’ – military or nautical term meaning to stand where you are ‘Hold fast’ – showing courage

Hvala!

I'm not really sure what "hold fast" means either in this context. To me it means something like "hold tight" or "cling". and i'm not sure why "with".