Dark Night Poem

Hello. This is called "Dark Night Poem" its a poem (well daaa-a!) and I am not expecting anyone to like it..


Out in the dark.
From outside the cars.
Stiff, gray bodies
In dark cars.

Broken glass.
Broken front eyes.
Engines off.
In yellow streetlights.

Won't get too far
In your car.
you're ****ing dead.
I'm not scared.

I'm glad I left.

*** this is directly connected to my "amoniac/cars" lyric

I like it! Would have been better if there were more blood and fire...

The point of this poem is not to describe mutilation or some stuff like that, but disrespect, hate and scorn.. hehe my English vocabulary when talking about emotions are quite limited...

btw.. thanks for the thoughts

no comment...

that's what I think............................................. .........................

whats that supposed to mean?