Originally Posted by
Alexei
I repeat similar occurences, just to help identify all of them:
СИЛЫ НЕБЕСНЫЕ \ HEAVENLY FORCES
V. Shakhrin
English retention by A. Markov
Силы небесные, так пожалейте же
Heavenly forces, on the earth, have a mercy // have mercy (remove "a")
Бедную нашу страну
Our poor land
Пусть виноватую, пусть миром клятую,
May it is guilty, let it’s cursed by the world // May it be guilty, let it be cursed ...
Но все же такую одну.
But it is the only one (such country) // (see below **)
Мы слезами горькими плакали,
We were weeping with bitter tears
Мы сыты кровавыми драками.
We are full with bloody fights
Силы небесные, пожалейте нашу страну.
Heavenly Forces! Have a mercy on our land! // remove "a"
Heavenly forces! Please have a mercy // remove a"
On our pitiful land
Let it be guilty, cursed by the people
Still we must all sick souls mend
Our tears have been bloody-red
We have been full of that horrid bloodshed
Heavenly Forces, have a mercy on our land! // remove "a"
Пожалейте берез весенний наряд
Pity the spring apparel of the birches
И первые в поле цветы.
And the first wildflowers
Пожалейте мальчишек, зелёных солдат,
Pity the boys, the “green” soldiers
И солдат, что со смертью на " ты".
And the soldiers, who can say “Thou” to death
Нецелованных девушек в дальнем селе,
The never-been-kissed girls in the far village
Мужиков, напившихся в дым.
The smashed faced (peasant) men // smashed-faced, hyphenated
Стариков, что еще коротают свой век.
The old ones, whish still pass their age (still are alive) // The old ones who while away their age?
Имена, что пока мы храним.
The names, that we still keep in our memory
Have a pity on birches in green and in gold // Have pity (remove "a")
Pity wildflowers and snowdrops
Have a pity on boys that have just been called up // Have pity
And on old soldiers that have been swapped // And on old soldiers who ...
Girls unkissed in far villages, widows of war
Country blokes ever drunk and unwise
The old ones that survived thru all blood and all gore // The old ones who ... all the blood and gore?
All the names that we still memorize
И ещё моих дочек, и твоих сыновей,
And more, on my daughters and your sons
И нестриженый вечно газон.
And on ever unmown lawn
Пожалейте всех тех, кто не любит меня
Have a pity on those who do not love me // Have pity
И всех тех, кто в меня влюблён.
And on those why fell in love with me // And on those who ...
Всех, кто делает дело и не просит у неба
On all, why do their job, and do not ask from you // On all who (no comma)
Как я, сочувственных слов.
The sympathetic words, as I do
Пожалейте всех тех, кто пишет стихи
Have a mercy on all who write the verses (poems) // Have mercy ... verses
И всех тех, кто верит в любовь.
And on all, who believe in love
Pity daughters of mine, pity your little sons
Pity lawns that have never been mowed
Pity those who hate me, and those who love
All those nameless and countless crowds
All the folk who just mind their everyday work
Pity poets, whose verses are rough
Pity those who don’t pray as often I do
And all those who believe in love
Heavenly Forces! Have a mercy on our land! // remove "a"