No Tomorrow

This song is pretty much a punk/hardcore song.
Verses are definitely screamed, I think the chorus and bridge will be sung.
Comments?

No Tomorrow

Lights blared from the distance,
Then I focused my vision.
Revealed was infliction,
body torn apart upon collision.

Visions before me,
burn through my eyes,
times of joy and sorrow,
I had so much to live for,
but there's no tomorrow.

Caught in a void of black,
I'm not able to see,
but it plays through my head,
then I slip without a plea

Visions before me,
burn through my eyes,
times of joy and sorrow,
I had so much to live for,
but there's no tomorrow.
There's no tomorrow..

Over in an instant,
why didn't I listen,
to the voices all around.
Told me not to go,
even though I did
And that's the way it'll all end!

Wish I could take it all back,
and undo what I did..

Visions before me,
burn through my eyes,
times of joy and sorrow,
I had so much to live for,
but there's no tomorrow.

Everywhere I go 5-0 wanna follow
Everytime I flow it's like there's no tomorrow
I can bring happiness or I can bring sorrow
You don't wanna mess around there's no tomorrow

Non Phixion to your ear drum

What?

nothing ;D just that ur lines dont realy get me hooked on.
i showed u 4 lines from "non phixion - no tomorrow" chorus

Oh. I was like "What the heck is that person talking about..."
But I understand.
Well, any ideas on how to make it better then?
Keep in mind, it will be screamed... :P

I dont know man.
i'm not realy good at these kinda lyrics.
but i'd like to hear the result after u record it
keep that in mind too ;]

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What's wrong PC?