long-legged divinity

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  1. texter-bernd said:

    Wink long-legged divinity

    I imagine a steady rock piece maybe a bit like the Rolling Stones:

    long-legged divinity

    long-legged, slim divinity
    how 'bout having sex with me
    you need not give your love for free
    my long-legged divinity

    we were young and careless kids
    prone to do what Ma forbids
    we would meet right after school
    we would do it by the pool

    long-legged, slim divinity
    how 'bout having sex with me
    you need not give your love for free
    my long-legged divinity

    I met her in the streets at noon
    I met her in a dim saloon
    I met her at the hotel bar
    we did it in my hired car

    long-legged, slim divinity
    how 'bout having sex with me
    you need not give your love for free
    my long-legged divinity

    could you wear your lingery
    could you do those things to me
    that make me explode

    long-legged, slim divinity
    how 'bout having sex with me
    you need not give your love for free
    my long-legged divinity


    Bernd
     
  2. wastrel said:

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    Good, fun song. Did you leave out a line in the final verse? Seems like a fourth line after "explode" would tie it in with the timing of the rest of the piece.
     
  3. texter-bernd said:

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    Thanks for your feedback.

    The three - instead of four - lines are the bridge. Similar in the meter (I'm not good with bridges) but different in tune.
     
  4. wastrel said:

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    Ahhh, yes, the bridge. Sorry for not picking it up. Well now I like the song even more. Great visual imagery.