Loves Gonna Come Back Around

Thread: Loves Gonna Come Back Around

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  1. Coley16 said:

    Default Loves Gonna Come Back Around

    This is the first song I have written so please tell me what you think, the title is the title of this thread

    You drag your feet along the ground
    What is lost is never found
    Or so it seems to you today
    The love you lost leaves no words to say
    The cold wind whips around your face
    You run to quicken up your pace
    Or do you run to 'scape this hell?
    Where broken hearts so often dwell
    The thunder clouds come rolling in
    Heavy rain drops hit your skin
    After all this time you should've learned
    You can never win when loves concerned

    Chorus: Oh loves gonna get you down
    It's gonna throw you to the ground
    But when you fall
    You must stand tall
    And that love's gonna come back around

    Your punished throat cries out for drink
    But all your mind can do is think
    About the girl from whom you run
    The girl you thought would be the one
    And as you sprint you start to weep
    She hurt you bad, she hurt you deep
    You try to push her from your mind
    To 'scape these burning ties that bind
    You see her face, like perfect art
    Say 'How can I move her from my heart?'
    Well I don't know why you're asking me
    Only she can set you free

    Chorus

    You turn and run the other way
    Now you know just what to say
    The rain is falling lighter now
    But the sweat is falling from your brow
    You run straight through her opwn door
    And there's the girl that you adore
    Everything you love is back
    Her smile, her face, her purple mac
    She runs to you and cries in pain
    'I thought i'd lost you in the rain'
    You kiss and hold her in embrace
    The pain is gone without a trace
    From behind a cloud out comes the sun
    Shines on you and your special one

    Altered Chorus: Oh, love went and got you down
    It went and pushed you to the ground
    But from the fall
    You stood tall
    And your love came back around

    Please tell me what you think, I know it's very rough around the edges so any help on stuff like a bridge or any improvements would be fantastic.
     
  2. Coley16 said:

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    It just means that sometimes people get too dwon too fast when love doesn't seem to work out or there's a bit of a problem in the relationship. When there's love, it will always stay or a small part of it will always be there even if you break up with the person or there's a problem. If you just stay strong and not let it get you down too much then it will always be there for you or you can find love again somewhere else.