This is the first song I have written so please tell me what you think, the title is the title of this thread
You drag your feet along the ground
What is lost is never found
Or so it seems to you today
The love you lost leaves no words to say
The cold wind whips around your face
You run to quicken up your pace
Or do you run to 'scape this hell?
Where broken hearts so often dwell
The thunder clouds come rolling in
Heavy rain drops hit your skin
After all this time you should've learned
You can never win when loves concerned
Chorus: Oh loves gonna get you down
It's gonna throw you to the ground
But when you fall
You must stand tall
And that love's gonna come back around
Your punished throat cries out for drink
But all your mind can do is think
About the girl from whom you run
The girl you thought would be the one
And as you sprint you start to weep
She hurt you bad, she hurt you deep
You try to push her from your mind
To 'scape these burning ties that bind
You see her face, like perfect art
Say 'How can I move her from my heart?'
Well I don't know why you're asking me
Only she can set you free
Chorus
You turn and run the other way
Now you know just what to say
The rain is falling lighter now
But the sweat is falling from your brow
You run straight through her opwn door
And there's the girl that you adore
Everything you love is back
Her smile, her face, her purple mac
She runs to you and cries in pain
'I thought i'd lost you in the rain'
You kiss and hold her in embrace
The pain is gone without a trace
From behind a cloud out comes the sun
Shines on you and your special one
Altered Chorus: Oh, love went and got you down
It went and pushed you to the ground
But from the fall
You stood tall
And your love came back around
Please tell me what you think, I know it's very rough around the edges so any help on stuff like a bridge or any improvements would be fantastic.