2 songs(please comment)

I wrote these awhile agao. I hope they are good.

1)Fighting for your love

You walked away from me
And I tried to stop you from going
But I couldn't do it

So I am fighting for your love
And I am trying to win
So you hid from me
And I am trying to see you


Five days later I see your face
As I run to you, you run from me
And you're running from your shame
As I try to help you


So I am fighting for you love
And I am losing you
So I am wondering if you love me
Still I fight for your love

As days passed, I can't see you
I can't hear you as you say sorry
Becuase I am still fighting for your love
Why...can't...you...understand?

So I am fighting for your love
And I have won your love
I...have...won


2) My last words


Take my pain from
Take my life from me
Kill me 'cuase I can't stand it
This heart is breaking

I need to leave this place
I can't stand this anymore
So these are my last words
My last words of pain


I can't move on with this pain
You are killing me in every way
I'm dreading you in this life
My heart is fading and these
Are my last words


I'm scared of taking the next step
'Cuase I might fall to you
And the words are coming back
And I am fading(from you)
Within, I hear your voice
But I couldn't hear you
Your words are meaningless to me
These are just words

I can't move on with this pain
Your killling me in every way
I'm dreading you in this life
My heart is fading and these
Are my last words

These are my last words....
Becuase of you....

I hope these turned out ok.

P.S I have 3 more songs ready but I'll post them next week. 2 in one thread then the other speratly

Very very sad.I like the second. It's so sad. But that's ok, I love sad songs.Good job!

I like the second...

Hope you compose songs like this, again...

do you mind if you visit my thread that I make here?

Thanks in advance...

Hey, I like the first one. I like how persistent it is, never give up on who you love.