We're different- my new song!Pls post your comment!

This is my first song...

I'm still newbie here...

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EDIT: since no one posting, I will just separate all my song!

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“We’re different”

I.
There’s something I want to tell you…
There’s something I want to reveal to you…
Something that I should tell you a long time ago…
But it seems that I’m too shy to say…
That… I love you…

II.
But I think the only way to say it…
Is the internet…
It’s the only way to show my feelings for you…
But you don’t believe me the first time I said it to you (Oh)…
Then I prove it to you many times…
And you believed it…

Refrain:

I thought we’re for each other…
I thought it’s our destiny…
To be each… other…
Oh… Yeah…

Chorus:

But… one time…
I realized that we’re not for each other (ohh… not for each other)…
Because…
We’re different in many ways (we’re different)... Oh!
We’re different in interest…
We’re different in our behavior…
Ohhh… Oh, no…
We’re different in many ways…




III:

Should I give up my love for you???
Or…
Should I try to keep up?
And just find another girl…
That have the same way that I have…
Oh!!!!!! Oh, No!!!!
(Repeat Refrain)
(Repeat Chorus)

Bridge:

Oh!!! Ohooohooh!!!
Maybe it’s not our real destiny…
To be each other…
Oh! No!
I’ll just erase all things that I have done for you…
All things…
I just give up the love that I feel for you…
(Repeat Refrain)
(Repeat Chorus except last line)

Outtro/ending:
We’re different in many ways…
We’re different…
We’re different…
It’s not our destiny…
It’s not our fate…
Oh…
We’re different…
We’re different…

Please...

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Thanks in advance!

Wow, For A Newbie that was pretty Good! Though I think you should have just let all verses rhyme because not all did, making it not rhyme is proffesional, good job though!

Thank you for the comment!

Anyway, should I rhyme all the verses or not?

Reviving.haha. Hope you read this.