Lets run ill follow

Lets Run Ill Follow

Here we go were both scared
Where did this love come from
Together were inseperable but your blind to that
So ill just show you my dreams
Look through these love soaked eyes and take a peak
Ill get the car and we can drive away
Running off love for our new life

We thought we were so strong
But people talked and broke this bond
Built from the love thats falling apart
Please break these walls
Cast so high i cant climb
So now were apart this love has stopped
So lets take this car
Our love cant be stopped
Ill ram through these walls your heart has built
Silence the mouths that tear us
Noones talking now silenced
As we drive away


Lets run
Ill Follow

Lets run
Ill follow

Lets run
Ill follow

Riding on love
This car will last
A new life we cast
This love of stone

Were unbreakable now






Hope you all like!!! Critism is appreciated =)

i liked it. it showed a typical teenage romance where people judge based on statuses in school, jobs, or maybe even life and one starts to drift from the other as whispers float around like a crow bar between you.
if it were me, i would've switched some of the words around to add a bit more structural sound to it but that's probably not your style of writing. all in all, not bad at all. read some of my work and leave me some criticism as well?

Yeah thats what i have trouble with. I need to right tabs to go with the songs i write but im not to good at guitar =(. Usually i have a songs guitar and beat in my head so i go with that haha i know terrible