New Song! (After Three Months)

My Newest Song, After Three Months!
Title: Whatever Happened To Our Love Story?
Notes: I decided to go back to the forums after the breaking up of the online band. Wish me luck, AND PLEASE COMMENT!




Say The Things That I Want You To Say
Ohoho….
Make Me Love You Like Back In The Day
Ohoho….
Whatever Happened To Our Love?
You Just Flew Away Like A Dove
But Memories Will Never Fly A-way-ay-ay-ay
I Still Remember That Spring Of May-ay-ay-ay
When You Told Me You Loved Me
But I Have A Question
You See-e-e-e-e-e
What Ever Happened To Our Love Story?
What Ever Happened Can You Tell Me Please-e-e!
It Just Passed Right By!
Like The Month Of July!
Were You Lying All That Time?
(PAUSE)
What Ever Happened To Our Love Story?
What Ever Happened To All That Glory?
You Gave Me…
Made Me Proud
To Have All That Love
But It Seems To Me
You Just Couldn’t See
All That Love
From Sea To Sea
You weren’t In Love With –uh Me…
(MUSIC)
Wo Ho Ho Wo Ho Ho Ho Wo Ho Ho Wo Ho Ho Ho Wo Ho Ho
Say The Things That I Want You To Say
Ohoho….
Make Me Love You Like Back In The Day
Ohoho….
Whatever Happened To Our Love?
You Just Flew Away Like A Dove
But Memories Will Never Fly A-way-ay-ay-ay
I Still Remember That Spring Of May-ay-ay-ay
When You Told Me You Loved Me
But I Have A Question
You See-e-e-e-e-e
What Ever Happened To Our Love Story?
What Ever Happened Can You Tell Me Please-e-e!
It Just Passed Right By!
Like The Month Of July!
Were You Lying All That Time?
(PAUSE)
What Ever Happened To Our Love Story?
What Ever Happened To All That Glory?
You Gave Me…
Made Me Proud
To Have All That Love
But It Seems To Me
You Just Couldn’t See
All That Love
From Sea To Sea
You weren’t In Love With –uh Me…

I liked it but with like the

'See-e-e-e-e," whatever that part.. Maybe only like two -e's. Seemed liked you did it a little to much. Same with the other parts where you did that.

Also the part that goes;

"Make me love you like back in the day," I just thought that instead of back in the day, you could put back in the old days. It just sounds better to me. Okay that's all.

Bye