a song i wrote a week ago, would appreciate some feedback
Fear The Sky
The martyr
Killed for their own ambitions
Labeled a blasphemer
For all he preached
Until the end
He would hold to his convictions
His last words still echo
Fear the sky
For it will damn you
As his followers
Faced endless persecution
Exiled by the church
One lone follower remained steadfast
In the teachings of the doomed prophet
Until the end
He would hold to his convictions
His last words still echo
Fear the sky
For it will damn you
As the years passed
His words became forgotten
Humanity progressed forward
Until the end
Steadfast he was in his beliefs
In the wind
His last words still echo
Fear the sky
For it will damn you