I can't cry- New song! Comment please! I need your feedbacks

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    A very short song that I made last 2006 and just remembered it yesterday...

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    “I can’t cry”

    I.
    We’re always together…
    We’re always calling each other…
    We’re laughing together…
    We’re helping each other in every problem we encountered…
    Oh, oh, oh, yeah…

    II.
    But now you’re gone in an unknown way…
    I kept calling to you…
    But you never answer it…
    I’m waiting… I’m waiting for so long…
    But still no answer from you…

    Refrain:
    This feeling I have for you…
    That I can’t erase in my heart…
    Why can’t I erase this feeling that I have???
    It’s like a gum, stuck in a bench forever…

    Chorus:
    I can’t cry!!!
    Oh…I can’t cry…
    ‘Cause I can move on!
    I know I can find a way to move on…
    I know I can find a way to get rid of this feeling…

    III.
    It’s too easy for you to left me…
    But I know it’s hard for you to forget me…
    Oh…
    You’re just lying, you’re just lying…
    And you don’t know the word love!
    (Repeat refrain)
    (Repeat chorus 2x)

    Bridge.
    Why did you do this to me???
    Why did you do this?!?!
    Your heart is like a rock…
    Because you don’t know …
    How to love somebody???
    Oh… Girl…
    I finally forgot you…
    I finally forgot you…
    Yeah, yeah, yeah…

    Outtro/ending:
    I finally get rid of this feeling out of my heart now…
    You’re just a girl…
    You just wasted my time…
    But, at least I forgot you…
    I can live without you…
    At last! I move on!!! (I move on, ohh…)
     
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    Actually, this is not new, but this is my very first song...

    But I wrote it last 2006 and just forgot it, and found the notebook where I wrote this song, and tweak it a little more, and poof, I have new song!

    I need your feedbacks, thanks!
     
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    Just reviving this. I'm inspired again. I might make a new lyrics again.xD
     
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    I love it, it's amazing for your first song
    [Today] is the *tomorrow* you worried about ~yesterday~.Live for the ♥next day♥, not the ◘day before◘.
     
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    Thanks for the comment.