What Children Fear (comment pls)

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    Ruins Of Tomorrow said:

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    older song, and a personal favorite enjoy

    What Children Fear

    Tick tick tock
    Hear the ticking of the clock
    As you drift off to sleep
    I'm the ice on your stiff neck
    The shadow that never moves from above

    Feel the heat of your fear and my presence
    Your dominion of what the children whisper under misty breath
    I'm the Boogeyman

    As each grain of sand falls
    Nightfall nears
    All of the smiles
    Shall turn into
    Cold sweat of despair

    Feel the heat of your fear and my presence
    Your dominionof what the children whisper under misty breath
    I'm the Boogeyman

    As you look over your shoulder
    Wondering if I'm near
    Are you overcome with fear

    Sleeping with one eye open
    Will not save you
    Can you feel the heat of your fear and my presence
    I'm the Boogeyman
    I will haunt your endlessly
     
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    zoniq said:

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    very good ruinsoftomorrow i really liked it..
     
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    Ruins Of Tomorrow said:

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    thanks for the comment, i'm trying to write more like this
     
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    zoniq said:

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    cool..its kind of my writing style this too.. especially :

    As each grain of sand falls
    Nightfall nears
    All of the smiles
    Shall turn into
    Cold sweat of despair
     
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    Ruins Of Tomorrow said:

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    mmm,i originally wrote this to be a black metal song the more i read it, power metal would suit it better
     
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    zoniq said:

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    yeah i think it suits better..