my new short rap tell me what you think plzz

bang 1 shot to da head 1 stab to tha heart thats ya life its jus fell apart
people thinkin there thugs buh there nuttin buh mugs
carrying guns cuz when you get shot its all ova
crawling on all fours crawling on tha floor trying to get to ya door
its agenst tha law shootin people down to tha floor
then after you realkise u int got nuttin atal you jus feel like your rely small
but wah tha fuzz dnt realise is its ganag war
and ya take a gr8 fall straight to a cell cuz you took revenge and when you take avengance its a life sentance in a cell for nuttin atal

yo the rap is gd but can i ask plz.. is the 96.. the year u were born? dont have to answer me that 1