My love song lyrics please read

I have some of this love song done about half for a friend. I was wondering if someone could finish it please.

Here is the lyrics so far. I need this tonight if possible because he sings this tommorow.

1. I've fallen in love with you tonight
and this is my chance to get it right
So I'll start off with this song to you
Cause the words ring in so true

2. I find myself always thinking of you
At work and in everything I do
In my heart If only you could see
This is my love pouring from me

3. Fallen in love is what I used to fear
But love is the reason why I'm here
Holding your hand under this tall oak tree
Feeling the wind with you standing next to me

hmm dnt know if u still need it, but had an idea for the chorus
here i am today..
on this bloody day thinking about
how you changed my life..
from dull black to bright shining sun

gives a little twist =] gl with whatever you'r doing

You make my head spin round
If I fell I know you wouldn't let me hit the ground
Don't know how to tell you
You leave me breathless
How could I stop thinking 'bout you
Your love has become my oxygen


Just a suggestion, review my songs PLEASE!
thanks,
thj625

PS: your song is so sweet!

thats nice..but u should finish



please review my new song.