Rollercoaster with link to song

i wrote a song about my emotions with life and how things are going.i also have a link to my band page that has the recorded song.
myspace.com/ithedivine

CHORUS:

Ive been up and down
This roller coaster has been tossing me around
I feel like ill never escape
My life seems so out of shape


VERSE 1:

I wanna run away from this place
Take off with a new name and face
Everything seems to fall on me
Like I'm the only thing containing gravity
If only you knew, what I've been through

VERSE 2:

I keep feeling like I'm all alone
As if i belong in the tomb of the unknown
But one day i know ill be a superstar
Just by playing songs on my guitar
If only you knew, what I've been through

BRIDGE:

If only you knew
Put yourself in my shoes

Hello Tyler,

I like your lyrics. Normally I wouldn't appreciate self-references too much - "But one day i know ill be a superstar; Just by playing songs on my guitar" - but it's okay since it's you, the singer and guitar player, yourself.

As for the music it's okay as is but it lacks the drama of the text. Too relaxed, too nice, it doesn't the text justice. Maybe a more dramatic arrangement could improve the impression, but I doubt it.

Well, never mind, this is a board about lyrics, and your lyrics are great.

Bernd