"My Dream" possibly one of the best on here lol

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  1. MyHeartForeverYours said:

    Default "My Dream" possibly one of the best on here lol

    In the past alot of aspiring artists have tried to rip off these lyrics and use them in songs without my permission. Honestly, if you choose to do this there is really nothing i can do. Be Original. Be You.


    If all the knowledge inked in books

    Could be in one great text,

    With one great title on its front

    And only one index,

    The words that I would like to see

    Upon that mighty cover,

    Would be imprinted much like this:

    "To love your fellow-brother."

    And then if man from sea to sea

    Would read the script therein,

    And understand its mighty facts

    And realize his own sin,

    Then thoughts would change from

    Those of crime,

    Of greed and cruel aggression,

    To those of universal love

    And brotherly affection...

    If in this world of want and war

    A union could be met,

    With brotherhood its mighty head

    And God its legal set,

    Then life would thrive and man would live,

    And peace would rule supreme,

    And I would know a world,

    Which now

    To me is but a dream.

    Created by Christopher Scott on 2.08.07
     
  2. MyHeartForeverYours said:

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    I didnt mean to sound arrogant of big headed when I said "possibly the best on here"...I wasnt talking about the lyrics themselves...but rather the meaning behind it. = )

    -Christopher Scott♥


    www.myspace.com/myheartf0reveryours
     
  3. redmoon said:

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    i feel sorry for anyone ripping of these lyrics or the idea behind them,as banal and cliched as the rest of the work in here.
     
  4. southern0077 said:

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    Wow I really like your writing, it has great meaning.
     
  5. redmoon said:

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    i thought you might southern 0077 lol
     
  6. intelligentdevelopment said:

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    If all the knowledge inked in books

    Could be in one great text,

    With one great title on its front

    And only one index,

    The words that I would like to see

    Upon that mighty cover,

    Would be imprinted much like this:

    "To love your fellow-brother."


    i really like that opening segment, similar message to what my lyrics convey
    Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle

    I stay in tune with the stars sun and moon
    'cause behind bars your doomed if your mind can't consume
     
  7. intelligentdevelopment said:

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    redmoon: it's not a cliche, it's the truth
    Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle

    I stay in tune with the stars sun and moon
    'cause behind bars your doomed if your mind can't consume
     
  8. redmoon said:

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    really please define the truth