Ferda anil yarkin - Aglayamam (review)

[aylin]

Bilemezsin ne haldeyim – u have no idea what situation i'm in
Ne haldeyim göremezsin - u cant see what situation i'm in
Rüzgar esmiş uzaklardan – the wind blew from afar
Dokunsan da değemezsin – even if u feel it u cant touch it
Özlüyorsam beni affet – forgive me if iam longing for (you)
Ne umut bu nede hasret - neither hope nor yearning
Seviyorsan yine affet – forgive again if u love (me)
Ne yalan bu ne de gerçek of – neither lie nor real
İsyan etsem de – even if i revolt
haykıramam yalvaramam – i cant shout i cant beg
Hasretinle yaşayamam – i cant live with ur longing
Bir ben kaldım tek başıma – i've stayed alone
Tek başıma ağlayamam – i cant cry lonely

any correction is welcome

[raluka]

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Bilemezsin ne haldeyim – u have no idea what situation i'm in
Ne haldeyim göremezsin - u cant see what situation i'm in
Rüzgar esmiş uzaklardan – the wind blew from afar(wrong)
-From far away the wind blew(right)
Dokunsan da değemezsin – even if u feel it u cant touch it
Özlüyorsam beni affet – forgive me if iam longing for (you)
Ne umut bu nede hasret - neither hope nor yearning
Seviyorsan yine affet – forgive again if u love (me)
Ne yalan bu ne de gerçek of – neither lie nor real
İsyan etsem de – even if i revolt
haykıramam yalvaramam – i cant shout i cant beg
Hasretinle yaşayamam – i cant live with ur longing
Bir ben kaldım tek başıma – i've stayed alone(wrong)
-ive end up all by my self(right)
Tek başıma ağlayamam – i cant cry lonely(Wrong)
-İ cant cry alone(right)

[raluka]

Most of your mistakes are understandble...coz i was having the same issues when i learned turkish...Your language compear to the others ist backwords..for ex:...İ go out with my friends .in turkish language the order is:Frinds my with out go i(Arkadaslarimla disarda cikiyorum)...Think u get my point...anyway...keep it going...youre on the right way:P:X

[aylin]

Thank you raluka i got ur point and if u mean this one: Rüzgar esmiş uzaklardan From far away the wind blew. so i have a Q why u started with the propositional phrase not SVPP? yani what makes mine (the wind blew from far away) wrong?