lyricism

here it is, look
you stole your rhymes from a crook
i stole my rhymes from a book
because knowledge is militance
opposition to ignorance
with wisdom we accrue the ability to pursue without belligerence
to explore this world in front of us with diligence
so i hope we find the confidence
to find faith in knowledge and
step back from what we've always been
from what we thought we had to be to be called men
because man and killer are like polar opposites
one stands beside his accomplishment, one stands on top of it
man finds his faith in intrinsic beauty
but killer only believes in his intrinsic duty
im just the messenger but my message is peace so please, don't shoot me
'cause civility dont need to be a casualty of passion
i spit the game insane but i aint angry, im just rappin
tryna hold on to the peace and the fibers of compassion
gonna share it with the world like a falsely gifted assassin
cause the blood shed spreads like a vicious cycle through hospital beds
always fightin, we should be enlightened instead
keepin our heads
stop wait, think before you hate
commiserate, alleviate, dont get irate
if we all participate, who knows? we could create
a more beautiful state, a more beautiful state

tell me what you think...i appreciate any constructive criticism

i like tha way you spit , very good flow to it add a ridin beat to it an you gotcha ya self a banga............................hit up my freestyles an give me a lil advice if ya wouldnt mind