some body please review my song you look but dont review

can people please review thanks

let me pop your cherry (girl)


(laughing)
its C.I.D
with another number one again girl

ll...
let me pop your cherry girl
let me pop ya cherry
let me pop your cherry girl
let me pop ya cherry
i'll turn your from zero to hero
give you the info to become a ninfo
turn you in to a sexual sysmbol
teach you how to hold ya breath
if you know what i mean (laugh)


ll...
let me pop your cherry girl
let me pop ya cherry
let me pop your cherry girl
let me pop ya cherry

girl were i come from we dont like spitting
so i'll have to teach you how to swollow
do things even your mother wouldnt do
my favirote page of the kumasatra
turn you ito a flexible profressional
number 1 contortionist on the scene

ll...
let me pop your cherry girl
let me pop ya cherry
let me pop your cherry girl
let me pop ya cherry
i'll turn your from zero to hero
give you the info to become a ninfo
turn you in to a sexual sysmbol
teach you how to hold ya breath
if you know what i mean (laugh)

ll...
let me pop your cherry girl
let me pop ya cherry
let me pop your cherry girl
let me pop ya cherry

l'll teach you how to go low
wave your hand like a pro
ride that pole like a rodio
take them clothes of with ya teeth
to play with 3 or 4 or evem more
use them wipes and chains
maybe even a bit of BDSM
tie em to the bed

ll...
let me pop your cherry girl
let me pop ya cherry
let me pop your cherry girl
let me pop ya cherry
i'll turn your from zero to hero
give you the info to become a ninfo
turn you in to a sexual sysmbol
teach you how to hold ya breath
if you know what i mean (laugh)



copy right @2009 criminal in disguise(c.i.d) production

i like it ,,,,its poppin maybe we could throw in a collaboration or somethin..........hey you should do me a huge fava an check out sum of my freestyles i would really appreciate if you did........but yea i was feelin where you were goin with it maybe some more lines in it but its not bad