How is Life ( a poem/song by ME)...tell me what you think

this is a poem i wrote a while back. if you dont understand, i used to smoke marijuana, and do alot of things i shouldnt. im glad i quit. my friends say this could be a song. i gess. well tell me what you think!!!!!!!!!this is to all those that still party and/or smoke.


How is life
through bloodshot eyes
veiwing life from
the skies
How is life
faking you above us all
when relly
your life is horrible
your the next to fall
How is life
wasting away
bound to die
anyday
How is life
on th foggy road
long, dark, and all alone
now just think
how is life...
without the bad habit
that you do
what has this thing
done to you
will it spread
to your friends too
can you live without this
find some other sort of bliss
why do you do it
is there something else
to help you go through
life
seeing clearly
but still having all your
fun
How is life
through bloodshot eyes
and twisted lies and lives
this is to you
stoner/smoker/hippie/etc.
have you ever seen
the beauty of things other than
green
How is life
not knowing whats behind
the haze
youve put yourself in
when will you begin
your actual life
the clear fight
How is life
dieing slowly
suicide
How is life
each blunt
each pill
each drink
rotting you away
suicide
How is life
knowing youve made nothing of yourself
but a burnt up
heap
suicide
How is life
through bloodshot eyes?

AMAZING ETRNALITO, REALLY NICE, thanks for shearing them!

hehe i thought you already read it, you didnt HAVE to read it here too. but THANKS anyways orwa!!!

Well eternal, this doesn't fit into the poetry rules...and nope...it's a bad idea to call it poem...but giiiiiirl this is totally a great lyrics for a song !!! LOL u live in Illinois...find a rapper and make him sing this....i love it, yup yup...i can really feel you in these words...what u went through..and why u started to the weed... good lyrics indeed

thanks thanks. it really is a poem but thanks i gess it's better as a song. thats cool.

yessss much better !

so tell me Etrnalito, may i sing it???

sure sure as long as i can hear it somehow when your done do as you please

Hoooooooooooooow is lifeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee (X8)
throoooooooooooough bloodshoooooooooooooooooot eyes
veiwing life frooooooooooooooooooooooooom (X10)
the skieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees
laaaaaaaaaaaaalaaaaaaaaaaaalaaaaaaaaaaaa (X4)
Hoooooooooooooooooooooow is lifeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
aaaaaaaa, i am soooooooooooooooooooooo tried, my fans will kill me, they want me to sing much more than that, help me please!!!

lmao.