another poem/song by ME...tell me what you think

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    eternalemo said:

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    Countdown till I’m Gone


    The countdown begins

    Slowly, menacingly, ticking away my life

    I’m scared

    Tired

    Lost

    Summer will soon be here

    Ill be away from him

    All my “friends”

    My favorite town,

    The place I’d wanted to be since I was young.

    Soon it’ll all be gone

    Ill be working shift to shift

    And fighting to stay sane.

    Tick, tock, tick, tock

    Its counting down

    I don’t know what to do

    Or what to think anymore

    It’s so close but so far away

    Im facing break downs,

    And “I can’t wait”

    All at once

    My mind is

    Clustered

    I know whats best for me though

    And I need to go

    Tick, tick, tick……..
    What is the cure for Cancer, Eric? The cure for death itself. The answer is immortality. By creating a legacy, by living a life worth remembering, you become immortal.--Amanda from Saw 2!
     
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    tigress_tim said:

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    Not bad either But i stick to the other one
    " Don't take life too seriously, no one gets out alive. "
     
  3. eternalemo's Avatar

    eternalemo said:

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    yes, this one is a little more personal, what im going through at this momenet.
    What is the cure for Cancer, Eric? The cure for death itself. The answer is immortality. By creating a legacy, by living a life worth remembering, you become immortal.--Amanda from Saw 2!
     
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    tigress_tim said:

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    Hang on girl, and remember...after every storm, the sun will rise again
    " Don't take life too seriously, no one gets out alive. "
     
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    eternalemo said:

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    yes yes soon he will be living with me and helping me pay rent and life will be great
    What is the cure for Cancer, Eric? The cure for death itself. The answer is immortality. By creating a legacy, by living a life worth remembering, you become immortal.--Amanda from Saw 2!