a rap i made please give me feedback

When Push Comes Ta Shove

[Intro]
ya kno theres just times in life when you feel like you just wanna give up, or when you dont have the will power ta fight anymore. when push comes ta shove
[Chorus 2x]
When push comes ta shove an you've had enough. You wanna be tough but its just too rough. think about the positive stuff. theres always somethin ta live for. even before you were born and staring at the hospitals decor on the birthing floor.
[Verse 1]
Now I'll admit I've gotta short fuse
and theres been times where i thougth i was being used
mentally confused and emotionally abused
i just didnt no what the **** to do
or even who i should turn to
i just wanted ta give it all up
found myself in a depressing rutt
i tried so hard ta suck it up
put on a hard front and acted tough
but that just wasnt good enough
i felt like a diamond in the rough
had a blasting migrain and wanted tylenol
but i decided to put it on a stall
because i was suicidal and woulda took em all til i had a bad fall
i was down on all fours but didnt have the strength ta crawl
it was right before i was gonna give up on it all
that i realized
[chorus 2x]
When push comes ta shove an you've had enough. You wanna be tough but its just too rough. think about the positive stuff. theres always somethin ta live for. even before you were born and staring at the hospitals decor on the birthing floor.
[verse 2]
ive had several sleepless nights
woke up in a bad mood and ready ta fight
constantly felt like i was wrong while everyone else is right
everyone pissed me off til i got heated
life was a game an i was constantly gettin defeated
as friends would stab me in the back i got tired of deciet
i was constantly draggin around my feet
started deseeding my bags an puttin the stems in acup ta save them up
drinkin every night then throwin up my guts
if that wasnt enough ta make my brain wanna bust
then i could always think of all the people that i couldnt trust
everyone was becoming ****in snakes
i was living off of ****ing pancakes
push turned into shove and i faced all kinda shakes
but i had to learn from my mistakes
i almost lost everythin i had before i learned that...
[chorus 2x]
When push comes ta shove an you've had enough. You wanna be tough but its just too rough. think about the positive stuff. theres always somethin ta live for. even before you were born and staring at the hospitals decor on the birthing floor.
[verse 3]
you know they say you gotta fall ta lose it all
well i had that fall an i lost it all
then i was awakened with a call
more like a really big reality check
even if you have noones respect
ya lifes a wreck an all tha bad memories you have u cant forget
still dont bust a sweat cuz in the end its not worth it
life is what you make it you can leave it or take it
take it from someone who can claim tha label most stressed
life aint **** if you constantly walkin around depressed
so take a deep breath and puff out ya chest
do ya best until your death
when push comes ta shove even if its just one person you are still loved
i mean look up to the heavens above
life is as beautiful as a dove flyin up above
so dont let **** get ta you when push comes ta shove

ya kno just take life day by day or it will go by fast even when you feel like you dont want life anymore as long as you happy thaz all that matters...**** everyone else.

nice song

nice job man. a lot of feelin in this song.

Really cliche.

Nice. It has some real content.