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1) Cat de greu mi-e sa te-aud
It's so hard for me to hear you
Soapte vechi sa tot ascult
To still listen to old whispers(?)
"Tot" e forma scurta de "totusi," "still"?

2) Si mi-e dor sa rupi tacerea
& I miss you breaking the silence
Doar in doi simti mangaierea
Only in two you feel the caress(?)

3) Si mi-e greu s-ascund durerea
& it's hard for me to hide the pain
Unui vis pierdut de noi
Of a lost dream of ours(?)
Durerea apartine la visul pierdut?

4) Unde esti, privirea mi-o ridic catre nori
Where are you, I raise my gaze towards the clouds(?)

5) O papusa pe alea tale sfori
A doll on those "sfori" of yours(?)


Si cu aceste versuri, vreau sa stiu de ce se zice asa:
"Trupul tau sa il sarut," "privirea mi-o ridic catre nori"

si nu: "Trupul tau sa sarut," "Imi ridic privirea catre nori"

Mersi mult snticipat!

I just corrected the sentences with mistakes and with (?) I hope it helps you,in rest good job

To still listen to old whispers(?)
"Tot" e forma scurta de "totusi," "still"?

u can translate in this case the word "tot" with "still" and also with "always & over and over again"...here it means that the person is listening to the old wispers over and over again

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Doar in doi simti mangaierea
Only in two you feel the caress(?)

yes this is right

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Unui vis pierdut de noi
Of a lost dream of ours
you can also say here: of a lost dream of us
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Durerea apartine la visul pierdut?
The hurt/pain belongs to the lost dream or the pain is because of the lost dream
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4) Unde esti, privirea mi-o ridic catre nori
Where are you, I raise my gaze towards the clouds
right
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5) O papusa pe alea tale sfori
A doll on those "sfori" of yours(?)
sfori is the plural of sfoară which means string or cord
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Si cu aceste versuri, vreau sa stiu de ce se zice asa:
"Trupul tau sa il sarut," "privirea mi-o ridic catre nori"

si nu: "Trupul tau sa sarut," "Imi ridic privirea catre nori"

here you can say both,trupul tau sa il sarut and also trupul tau sa sarut,it's just a change of the normal sentence construction but both have the same meaning it's the same with privirea mi-o ridic catre nori....(was this the point u meant?)

Thank you so much Zahra!!! You've explained everything so well!

Mersi foarte mult!

no don't say thank you for that it's no problem...if u have more questions just ask