Salwa Al Qatreeb - Khudni Maak

Hi,

I need help to correct my translation.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tBMSmq_0ih4

http://www.4shared.com/file/91513245...0e2/_____.html

خدنــي معــك علــى درب بعيـدة
Take me with you to a far away place
مطــــرح ما كنــا ولاد صغــار
The place where we were children
ودفــي ربيعــي بشمس جديــــدة
And my spring was warmed by a new sun
ونسيني يــوم الـ صــرنا كبـار
And made me to forget the day that we grew up

خـدني معك يا حبيبـي يا حبيبـي
Take me with you oh my darling
مطــرح ما لـون الأزرق غـاب
To a place where the blue colour became sheltered
نمشي ســوا يا حبيبي يا حبيبي
And we will walk together oh my darling
عا أرض الرمل الـ فيها عشاب
on a sandy ground with grass on it
بعـب الهــــوى خبينــي خبينــي
Hide me hide me in the sleeve of the love
واتركنـــي ضيع بقلبـــو نهــار
And just leave me lost in its heart for a day
قــول للهـوى يا هــوى ينسيني
Say to the love : Oh love forgets me
ينسـيني يــوم الـ صــرنا كبــار
Let the day that we grew up forget me ( ? )

قــــول للهــــوى يودينـا يودينـا
Tell the love to convey us
فــــوق جبـــال الـ مالها حــــدود
Over the mountains without frontiers
بكرا الزمن رح يمحي أسامينا
Tomorrow the time will erase our names
يشــــحط عليها زياح الســـود
and moves away from them the dark procession (?)
اسرِقنــي أنا اسرقنـي وخليني
Kidnap me kidnap me and let me
إقطــف نيســـــــــان زرار زرار
gather the april buttons (flowers ?)
خــدني معك خــدني ونســـيني
Take me with you and make me forget
نسـيني يـــوم الـ صـرنا كبــــار
to forget the day that we grew up

Thanks in advance

خدنــي معــك علــى درب بعيـدة
Take me with you to a far away placeway
مطــــرح ما كنــا ولاد صغــار
The place where we were children(where we used to be kids)
ودفــي ربيعــي بشمس جديــــدة
And my spring was warmed by a new sun
and warm my spring with a new sun
ونسيني يــوم الـ صــرنا كبـار
And made me to forget the day that we grew up

خـدني معك يا حبيبـي يا حبيبـي
Take me with you oh my darling
مطــرح ما لـون الأزرق غـاب
To a place where the blue colour became sheltered
نمشي ســوا يا حبيبي يا حبيبي
And we will walk together oh my darling
عا أرض الرمل الـ فيها عشاب
on a sandy ground with grass on it
بعـب الهــــوى خبينــي خبينــي
Hide me hide me in the sleeve of the love
واتركنـــي ضيع بقلبـــو نهــار
And just leave me lost in its heart for a day
قــول للهـوى يا هــوى ينسيني
Say to the love : Oh love forgets me
ينسـيني يــوم الـ صــرنا كبــار
Let the day that we grew up forget me ( ? )
let it make me forget the day we became adults

قــــول للهــــوى يودينـا يودينـا
Tell the love to convey us
فــــوق جبـــال الـ مالها حــــدود
Over the mountains without frontiers
بكرا الزمن رح يمحي أسامينا
Tomorrow the time will erase our names
يشــــحط عليها زياح الســـود
and moves away from them the dark procession (?)
اسرِقنــي أنا اسرقنـي وخليني
Kidnap me kidnap me and let me
إقطــف نيســـــــــان زرار زرار
gather the april buttons (flowers ?)
i guess zrar zrar means one bu one
خــدني معك خــدني ونســـيني
Take me with you and make me forget me
نسـيني يـــوم الـ صـرنا كبــــار
to forget the day that we grew up

as usual great try

Thank you very much Larosa. Just two questions :

1) يشــــحط عليها زياح الســـود - What really means زياح الســـود?

2) إقطــف نيســـــــــان زرار زرار - How would be the translation ?

Thanks again

As Larosa said
ودفــي ربيعــي بشمس جديــــدة
Warm my spring with new sun.
You translated it as: my spring was warmed by a new sun
Daffi is an imperative word and not past, I think you supposed it was Daffa
Daffi دفي with ya2, Daffa دفى with alif maqsourah.

بعـب الهــــوى خبينــي خبينــي
يعب : means to quaff. it wasn't so clear when I heard it by Fadel.
(And I) quaff passion, Hide me hide me... (I have no idea about the relation between tow parts)

واتركنـــي ضيع بقلبـــو نهــار
I know that you know the word alb as heart but we use it as inside (the thing)....

For Yesh7at 3layha Zeya7 essoud.
Yesh7at means: to bring.
I'm not sure of the other parts, you may ask Daydream's help. Because the meaning of zeya7 which I found in dictionary has relation to do with riligious rituals in Church, but that meaning can't match the song here/

I'll complete tomorrow