firs poem for this site

are you tired of the same old sh**
ready to try something new, something better
people telin you to take just one more hit
then itsgood your reading this letter
stand up say what you want
you need to get your act togather
ignore all the peoples teasing and taunts
grow up to be a better person
live life in manydiffrent fonts
dont say goodbye till its ime to go
or end life on a bad note
no one likes a halfway show
ride life like a sail boat
you will get where you need to go
when the wind starts to blow
there arent any answrs to life
go on an adventure and get lost for awhile
your sword may just be a knife
but dont let that bring you down a notch on you dile
life is too short to end so soon
do we know too little or too much
about this life balloon
life is like a balloon fragile and easily by needle or knife
live long enough to marry a wife
have some kids too they will do the same things you do
the pointis life life while you have it
this isnt something to take forganted

its really good thumbs up there are a few spelling mistakes but over all its good.

Hey Hendrix,

Spelling is pretty bad as already mentioned but that's easily fixed.
I liked it except for this bit

do we know too little or too much
about this life balloon
life is like a balloon fragile and easily by needle or knife
live long enough to marry a wife

I think you mention balloon a little too quickly in succcession (sp?)
Y'know?
Maybe drop the line "about this life balloon"
And shorten the next ? maybe "life is like a balloon easily (insert verb...Popped? Ended?shattered? damaged? ruined?) by needle or knife"

I dunno,
that's my 2 cents anyways
Keep up the good work
T