this is my first song i'v written, and i just want to know weather poelp think its god or not. it's about a girl meeting a guy who is really mean to her and this is what she thinks and feels.

Dark trap

You think that you池e in charge,
All you do is make me cry,
So my hate for you is large,
That痴 why I want to say goodbye,

You just kept me locked in a cage,
Made me work to the bone,
And if I speak you get in a rage,
You made sure I was alone,

Chorus:
If I could, I would walk out,
I would be free from you hands,
I would run and scream about,
And I could have bigger plans.

You constantly lied to me,
You just used me from the start.
Telling me that I could be free,
There is no love in you heart,

Now I just live in fear,
I just hate you guts.
Every time you have loads of beer
My body gets covered in cuts.

Chorus:
If I could, I would walk out,
I would be free from you hands,
I would run and scream about,
And I could have bigger plans.

Now I知 stuck in you dark trap,
You forced me to be you wife
I値l have to deal with this crap,
I知 jammed in this rotten life

Now I知 stuck in you dark trap,
You forced my to be you wife
I値l have to deal with this crap,
I知 jammed in this rotten life.