song im working on...NEED HELP!

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  1. chudsinator said:

    Default song im working on...NEED HELP!

    im currently working on a song but cant seem to finish it... its been a week and a half now and ive made no progress since i finished the 1st verse. if someone could help me finish/start the chorus/2nd verse i would appreciate it greatly..

    song starts like this

    Im just wakin up, got alot on my mind
    time to get back to the usual grind
    lookin back at the weekend, what a good time i had
    just cant get this girl outta my head
    as im writing this song, im thinkin of you
    im wondering what your up to
    its that sparkle in your eye, its that smile on your face
    i just dont understand, it makes my heart race

    PLEASE HELP!

    Thx!
     
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    maxi said:

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    try not to make it too obvious what your song is about.
    A good lyric is one that let's the listener/reader wandering and searching for a meaning or reason behind certain words or a combination of words.
    That's when your lyric turns into poetry.
    Use certain words only you and your environment uses, use objects and anecdotes that seem to have nothing to do with the song to someone else but it makes sense to you 'cause it's your story. Don't be afraid to drag your world into the whole thing.
    I promised I would drown myself in mystic heated wine