electro/hip hop lyrics review needed

Hi, I have written my lyrics for one electro/hip-hop song. Now I want to ask somebody to check it.

Please, just type in quote or in PM that you are in, and I will send you the lyrics in PM.

I'm not a native English speaker, so therefore I will need a grammatical and stylistic corrections .

I will be very thankful, if somebody helps me.

nobody?

hi i will