MTV's *****es ! please give some feedback, i need it :D

Do you, remember back in school
All the nerds they were uncool
Loneliness, ev'ry recess
Don't believe, there's no depress

Britney, Justin, Rihanna
Pretty sure, I don't want ya'
MTV's little *****es
Only a place for the richest
Here's my priceless advise
Popularity dies ! ! !

Do, you remember back in time
Teenage years, endless climb
Ev'ry thing you did was wrong
Love is lost, love is gone

Britney, Justin, Rihanna
Pretty sure, I don't want ya'
MTV's little *****es
Only a place for the richest
Here's my priceless advise
Popularity dies ! ! !

Do you, remember back in school
All the nerds they were uncool
Loneliness, ev'ry recess
Don't believe, there's no depress

Come on. Some feedback ?

the lyrics are direct and meaningful, you certainly get the message out

I can imagine this going as somekind of rap, or Limp Bizkit kind of music, but as heavy metal I wouldn't work ... I think, but otherwise a nice piece of work

Originally Posted by Silverhowl

the lyrics are direct and meaningful, you certainly get the message out

I can imagine this going as somekind of rap, or Limp Bizkit kind of music, but as heavy metal I wouldn't work ... I think, but otherwise a nice piece of work

Thanks for feedback. sorry but i don't see this as a rap or anything like that, I already have a melody for this song, with heavy guitar and drums. but thank you anyway.

ah alright, but imo the lyrics subject doesn't suit for heavy metal :P

Originally Posted by Silverhowl

ah alright, but imo the lyrics subject doesn't suit for heavy metal :P

Yeah, I know, but this is intended for the Grunge genre...