help with lyrics!!!!

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  1. cadyluna9 said:

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    hey yall.
    i really really need help with some lyrics tht im gonna give to my bf.
    does anyone knw some lyrics tht are unknown but sweet and loving?
    if anyone saw the other songs i posted u can also coment n those here, i just need t find some good lyrics!!!!!!!
    HELP!!!!!!!!!
    thnx
     
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    Inskeepruler said:

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    Well I have written part of a love song. Its not finished but it could help. Here it is:

    I'll love you more than you'll ever know
    Over time my love for you has grown
    I just want you to see
    You mean everthing to me
    I just want you to know (that)

    You are my heart
    You are my everything
    You are my life
    You are the air I'm breathing
    And when you walk away, you know I'll wait for you
    I'll love forevermore, you know it's true

    Thats all I have. Hope you like it!
     
  3. cadyluna9 said:

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    i lve the lyrics u left.
    they are great.
    thnx for the sugestins!
     
  4. mimzy said:

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    I Want Joe Askar, Dakhel El Janouj Lyricss Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
     
  5. stephanie bennett said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Inskeepruler View Post
    Well I have written part of a love song. Its not finished but it could help. Here it is:

    I'll love you more than you'll ever know
    Over time my love for you has grown
    I just want you to see
    You mean everthing to me
    I just want you to know (that)

    You are my heart
    You are my everything
    You are my life
    You are the air I'm breathing
    And when you walk away, you know I'll wait for you
    I'll love forevermore, you know it's true

    Thats all I have. Hope you like it!
    I's a disturbing yet pronounced, if you will, a short story. I got chills...
     
  6. Lyricky said:

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    Okay, i think i can do with writing a love story. Pls house criticise if it aint good enuf.

    When i said to you
    That i never wana love another man boy it was true,so true
    I meant to marry you
    And when i did,
    I'l be the one to take care of you
    For you
    Now you say you wanna leave me boy,
    When around you i had built my world,
    Whatever you do about it baby,
    Is definitely crazy
    Please give me one chance to show you
    Chorus
    Boy i'ld wait for you
    And i'l never love another man
    But you, but you
    I'll pause my heart for you
    And when you come home,
    You'ld be the one to make it move
    Only you
    But before you finally leave me boy,
    Think about what you do to my world,
    Whatever you do to hurt me baby,
    Is gonna drive me crazy
    Please give me one chance to show you.
    Sorry, this is a track i'm working on but i've not fixed a chorus yet. You can have it anyways cos its a track i dumped already. Anyone can contact me directly for help with personal lyrics. B gud!
     
  7. Luke of Metal said:

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    Try to not rhyme Crazy with Baby


    Every single "R'n'B" song uses it and it's crap.



    also


    Girl and World (exception is Journey's Don't Stop Believing which is timeless and rock so it's automatically good)
    Lately and save me
     
  8. SpringyTrampo-Lines said:

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    Something that always helps me start a song is starting with a haiku--poem with syllable length per line of 5-7-5--and just build off of that.
    Works for me. He might also just like a compilation of haiku or other simple poems
    Good Luck!
     
  9. mitchlaut said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by cadyluna9 View Post
    hey yall.
    i really really need help with some lyrics tht im gonna give to my bf.
    does anyone knw some lyrics tht are unknown but sweet and loving?
    if anyone saw the other songs i posted u can also coment n those here, i just need t find some good lyrics!!!!!!!
    HELP!!!!!!!!!
    thnx
    Day By Day

    I stand next to you
    at your side
    it feels so natural, so right
    i dont want to leave
    you are my all,
    and my all belongs to you

    Day by Day when i think i have lost it all
    you are by my side
    you are my one and my all
    i will always love you
    you are the only one i trust
    and Day by Day i realize that i will always love you

    Mountains may seperate us
    but never will they stop us
    all i think of is you
    when im lost i think of when im in your arms
    i hear you breath
    as you sigh with relief that i have not left your side

    Day by Day when i think i have lost it all
    you are by my side
    you are my one and my all
    i will always love you
    you are the only one i trust
    and Day by Day i realize that you will always have me by your side


    this is a nice brief beginning to a song i made feel free to use it, the rest you can make off this song yourslef, i hope it helps =D
     
  10. m.simos said:

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    check my lyric pure love