Hey guys, this is my first post here so I'm hoping you can all tell me what you think of this lyric. I wrote it about a year ago, and its since been through a few incarnations. This is what I've settled on. Its about sitting on a hill with a girl and the thoughts and feelings that go with it.

V1
Look at the stars tonight
There's something in the way they shine
If you try real hard
they can make you feel at home
As the shopkeepers leave for bed
And as the lights down george street burn
we only have each other
to clear the silence in our heads

Chorus
Sing the blues with me
It helps me when I'm down
You know i'll be around
To play what you wanna hear
You can cry
If it helps you feel at home again
Love, Sing the blues

Verse 2
She says look out at the lights
In the country they don't seem so bright
And I think I see why
she always feels alone
As the bus leaves for the last time today
We've missed our ride home again
and we only have each other
To warm our melting hearts

Chorus

B section
One more year, you'll be outta here
Two more year and we'll be home free
Three more year and you'll be where you wanna be
Just you and me

Chorus

If you're interested in hearing the songs there's a recording over at:
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6980442

CHeers!