World of Fire

Been working on this for some time now, and I feel it's pretty mutch finished. Any feedback would be great!

Take from another
leach of eachother
in this endless paradise
the garden of eden
is nothing but our new franchise

Oh, why dont you stop
Where all so tired
how long till' they realise
we there was no threat
no bombs, no greater cause
now, only hate will spread

Take from another
leach on eachothers
Earning of this endless
This endless paradise
in the garden of eden
nothing but our new franchise

worse things started with less X2

so why dont you stop
for the common good
how long until you realise
there's no man in the caves
and all this oil
will be mine to take

Eating through the promise
and in the fire,
will you burn or will you bend
This land will be civilized

wow thats so good!


im begging u to review my lyrics


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