Just something I though of...

Well this is for my bestfriend so it has to be perfect. it's not my best so i'm looking for critisim

I never know how I should feel
Wandering this void that fills my life
I know that I shouldn’t be doin this
But it all feels oh so right

I know that eventually
The gray will surround me
It’ll take out the blue
and leave me on my own

-verse-
Open my eyes and let me see
Save me from fading, from all these things
I want someone to see how I am now
Maybe someone to save me, somehow
-verse-

Pull me through this mess
Straight into the good days
Right into what some call haven
And I call the other side

~~~Verse~~~

Where can I go?
Whats out there?
I know I can go with you
Just to slip out of this eternity
Would make me smile
Grab my hand and pull me along
Hold on with your life
And I’ll hold on with mine

hey , nice song ! the only thing that i would change is :

Open my eyes and let me see
Save me from fading, from all these things
I want someone to see how I am now
Maybe someone to save me, somehow

I would change it to something like

Open my eyes and let me see
Save me from fading, from all these things
I want someone to see the way I am now
Someone that could save me, somehow

It's just my opinion It's very nice anyway