please read, my second song!

Thread: please read, my second song!

Tags: None
  1. thj625 said:

    Question please read, my second song!

    Felt it in the first moment
    The poison sinking in
    Knew nothing would keep this love burning
    Didn't care
    What they would say
    I was falling swiftly
    Didn't know you'd let me hit the ground

    Ohhhh no
    Don't want another one of your games
    Yeah you win
    But my heart isn't the prize
    Yeah you
    Can tell me
    To keep breathing
    But your evil and ugly took over
    You win
    Is this what you wanted?
    Toxic?
    Is it satisfying
    Knowing you broke a heart?

    -it's short and just a draft....comment
     
  2. pocketace said:

    Default

    thats pretty good.


    please review mine?
    im beging u

    http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ly...my-lyrics.html